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Butafly Creek When I hoped in the car I was wandring whey we wher going.Then dad sed wey going to Butfly Creek. Then we hoped out of the car. First we looked at the Butflys. Then we careon woking to the crokodil the wer big best.The best thing was seeing the crokdile geting fed.

** When I hopped in the car, I was wondering where we were going. Dad said we're going to Butterfly Creek. We hopped out of the car and first we looked at the butterflies. Then we carried on walking to the crocodiles. They were the best. The best thing was seeing the crocodile getting fed. Edited by Mrs Dean **

Ronan 24/3